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rosepetals46
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0 posted 2020-06-21 09:21 PM




alone
just me and the
shadows that move and change
waiting for the perfect time to
pull me under and steal the light away
feels like I constantly struggle
to grasp the joy that hides
leaving me here
alone

~rosepetals46
-was rospetals26 once upon a time




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Temptress
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1 posted 2020-06-25 07:29 PM


I've been here. I hope this is just reflection on the past and not something you're experiencing now.

I love the way you make it known.

Jenn


"Maybe that's the way I should go
Straight into the mouth of the unknown"

Shinedown

Sven
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2 posted 2020-06-25 08:11 PM


I like the flow of this. . . nicely done.  

-- That which gives light must endure burning.
Viktor Frankl

Michael
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3 posted 2020-06-25 11:43 PM


Joy might be a tad overrated, says the man who is literally incapable of feeling it.  There is contentment, and peace and many other gits awaiting those who direct their eyes away from the have nots, and unto the haves.

Michael

jwesley
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4 posted 2020-06-26 11:32 PM


Loved this, my friend . . . all kinds of things within its footprint.  Well done.

j.

rosepetals46
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5 posted 2020-06-28 09:21 PM


All those familiar names I see. I missed seeing them.

Thank you for your nice comments     

~rosepetals46
-was rospetals26 once upon a time

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