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Lynn From CT
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0 posted 2020-05-06 11:09 PM



Nobody helped me. When I asked
All of sudden... the lines were drawn
Nobody texted... nobody called
Well it's time to go shopping,
And right what was all wrong

Now I see the rainbow thru the trees
Got no real friends that I can see
But that's okay it time to do me
I'm gonna shop till I drop
I'm gonna eat. Im gonna play
Im finally gonna get my own way

Now it ain't a whole lot
I'm used to making much more
It's enough baby to make a scene
I really want to jet far far away
got to be patient not act like a fiend

But as the days get longer
And sun shines bright
I know my time is coming
I gotta be smart.. act cool
Hold on a little bit more
An' everything will be all right

I had nobody, was all alone
Crying myself to sleep
but it's time to do me
Its time to get freaky
Now ya all gonna see

First I'll buy new clothes
To set the right scene
Then its time to get ready
Because this time around
I'm gonna do only me

So f' all the people
Who didnt want to share
When I was a bit needy
Cause now it's my turn
to act freaking greedy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2020-05-08 05:34 AM


Lynn,
Something about your style reminds me of me. So of course I love it. I liked your rebel yell in this.

Welcome to the big blue buffet, as I like to call it. Hope you like it here. ~L

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