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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2020-05-04 10:33 PM



Hey, Golden knight
In the dark night,
Could you love she
In Las Vegas ?

There is an answer
To a loving heart
When the desert
keep silence quite !

Would she marry me
In Las Vegas; knight
The kind of question
That stop the time.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2020-05-06 07:12 PM


If the rumors hold true, then marry me in Las Vegas are fairly common words spoken. Be that as it may,to run off to Los Vegas to get married can be considered to be quite impetuous. And indeed, a heart stopping question to be asked.
I enjoyed this poem very much and it's romantic implications. ~L

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2020-05-09 02:56 AM


Romantic thoughts but Las Vegas has lost its charm for now.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2020-05-09 03:21 AM


thanks Lori, for sure, there are so much clichés about Las Vegas, but marry someone  is still romantic, there are some french people who go there to marry, I loved very much your comment
yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2020-05-09 03:24 AM


Thanks Ida, I will not marry in Vegas , like in "two and a half" with Charlie Sheen , i love these series
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