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Midnight Oil
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Midnight Oil |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Papers stacked wall to wall Pale light glimmering over my heavily-grained desk Words flowing like running water Tales of heart and poems of passion From the window I can see her coming I hear her footsteps and my heart begins to race Midnight… She leaves her world and comes to mine We two, trapped in a forbidden love Engulfed in flames of rapture fueling our heated desires Then, as the light of dawn sears through the panes she’s gone… I wrote her that way Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
And a mighty good way to write her, my friend. You write was basic and put her in the light you wanted her to be seen in. And it works out well for the both of ya. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-15-2017 05:01 PM).] |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thanks so much Mr. Bolton! I appreciate your comments! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Inside our heads we are free to paint life any color we like. And if we can spell it we can share it.  ~L |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
"Inside our heads we are free to paint life any color we like. And if we can spell it we can share it". Truly fascinating reply Lori Rhoden. Thank you so very much! If we can share it, may many receive it well, for we are free indeed.  Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so lovely, PU, the important i Guess are the sentiments shared during the night, the sincerity of the poem too and the way she moves, wonderful yann |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you kindly yann. I appreciate your comments. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed reading this...james |
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