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Open Poetry #50

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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2020-03-21 11:07 PM

There is a clock up on the wall,
I hear no sound, no sound at all,
No tick, no tock, just silent sweep
Of second hand in endless creep,
What I wonder the paradigm
Of what once was called the abysm of time.
What can one seek
in thoughts oblique?

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2020-03-25 09:02 PM

I liked it . . . what's there. Just didn't feel it was finished, or like all of us do at times, just ended it because we lost our train of thought.

j.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2020-04-02 07:24 AM

We've seen a lot in our blue years, Tim. And you've never let me down.

Excellent words.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2020-06-01 10:43 PM

Time is more like a blink than an abysm I'm thinking. Like your ponder even so.

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