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DarkofNight
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0 posted 2020-01-24 10:50 PM




What is the darkness?
A place to hide from the day,
Where you keep sadness.

Why are there the tears?
To wash the soul of empty
To forget light that sears.

Who am I being?
An empty one hiding fears
Where no one’s seeing.

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Gunslinger
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1 posted 2020-01-24 11:17 PM


Very melancholy and moving. Yes, sometimes darkness is our only friend. A place to hide from ourselves.
Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2020-01-28 11:38 AM


DarkofNight...Enjoyed to honesty and reality in this. Welcome to our Family of Friends.
Sure hope you decide to stay...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

soul drifter
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3 posted 2020-02-01 10:25 PM


Darkness can feel like home just like the light can. Well done and welcome to pip. Hope you enjoy.
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