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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2020-01-16 11:14 PM


The blessed rain fell
on a fiery hell
after much destruction
and death,
allowing the heroes
a well-deserved rest.
But the rain
could not cleanse
the evil from the hearts
if those taught hate,
the vile agitators
who have sealed their fate.

              Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2020 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2020-01-17 04:52 AM


Good for you MM I couldn't have written it better!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2020-01-17 06:17 AM


Thank you, Eric.

Paul Wilson
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711
United States
3 posted 2020-01-17 05:25 PM


Ida...So glad to hear the fires have stopped.
The rain was much needed, now the rebuilding can began. Along time ago a lady named Suetang from Australia use to post here, she was a good person and hope she is all right. Enjoyed the poem...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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California
4 posted 2020-01-20 08:07 PM


Very well said.  Was brutal and devastating what took place there...  and evil!
soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado
5 posted 2020-02-05 02:23 AM


Well said. Although I've never been there. I love Australia, they've contributed to the world some of the coolest bands I've ever heard, their country is beautiful and I love the humor and character of the people. Good news. Anyway, good write!
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