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Truth Of The Matter
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Truth Of The Matter |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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From the cortex chambers ventriliquists speak with their distant voices probing the soul's quiet palace. They demand necessities: Amen - and forgiveness; they repair despair, teaching lessons from straw to sticks to bricks. Yet what sad reality, the acceptance of the mediating value of lies, when the truth was never better. Why is it some disguise body and mind, until they are forced into the open exposed by their glib shallow rote? While, all the voices in the palace, ventriloquists of inner thought, remain quantum reminders, that from the heart, to the great light that fills the sky, all accept the gift of consciousness - and in the end, it comes down to the truth of the matter. Ethome true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Love the way you ended this one, Eric. "While, all the voices in the palace, ventriloquists of inner thought, remain quantum reminders" Deep and powerful |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Michael glad you appreciated that phrase, a lot of things to be repeated for emphasis by the language of poetry it's a lot of enjoyment sometimes, oils the rusted hinges of doors not opened for a while..... Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Eric...This sounds like a visit from memories of long ago. Sort of a Bob Dylan song comes to mind. Really enjoyed...Paul Really liked your reply to Michael about a lot of things to be repeated for emphasis by the language of poetry it's a lot of enjoyment sometimes, oils the rusted hinges of doors not opened for a while ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paul, thank you for the visit and for the fine comments. This was not meant to be a lyric it's just a straight unconventional type of poetry. anyway working on other things that are more lyrical. Thanks appreciate your visit. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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