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A Cool Summer Rain ( For My Daughter )
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A Cool Summer Rain ( For My Daughter ) |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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A Cool Summer Rain By Paul Wilson A cool rain greets me this hot Summer night setting my soul free Softly the raindrops fall upon my skin releasing the pain inside of me The rain washes away my pain and memories from years I’ve lived thru The fresh smell of tonight’s rain has made my heart smile and feel new A calmness comes over me as the cool rain consumes me… with it’s gentle touch Releasing all the tension and stress of the day come again sweet rain I love you so much As the Summer rain slowly subsides it leaves me happy … I must confess I Hope it returns again tomorrow to cool my soul with its soft gentle caress The clouds open wide releasing their magic potion once again…I can never get to much The rain that falls upon my skin Releases my pain with its gentle touch With outstretched arms I will be waiting for your return Bring me your sweet nectar for which I yearn Come again Summer rain… come again I’ll be here waiting for you Come again Summer rain… come again I’ll be here waiting for you For My Daughter She Loved The Rain Copy Righted 7/18/18 |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I find the rain to be a cleansing...of body, mind, and spirit. A perfect chance for peaceful reflection. Beautiful writing, Paul. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Michael...Thank you so much for your touching reply. I wrote this in 2018 but because of her health I don't know if she got a chance to read it, because she never commented to me about it. I can only hope that she did read it. Thanks again for all you do and for being there for me...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'm sure your daughter would love this tribute as well, Paul. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ida...I know she would. The rain always perked her up. Thanks for reading and your sweet reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paul, don't know exactly what to reply but I was able to capture the sincere depth of your feelings as you transferred them into my mind and heart.... Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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