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Your Touch
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Your Touch |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Your Touch You touch and I’m left dangling on a string with heart expanding and I do believe no angling will relieve me of its load for now I’m captured, snared and raptured by sensations manufactured on a countdown to a fracture bursting to explode. Out blast those tingling impacts riding nerves to every synapse telling knees and legs they might collapse upon this flattened floor. I’m drenched in breathless breathing that now blinds my heart perceiving why my lungs and mouth are grieving since there’s oxygen no more ‘cause your aroma sends me reeling with hypnotic smell careening into muscle, flesh and bone at rates which can’t be charted and I would spend forever basking in your breath with everlasting hope you’d never end my gasping only just now started. And from this magic moment transfixed, I will find your image did fix in my mind when Time does insist I have reached my end. I’ll walk Eternity without the stumbling on legs and feet made whole from crumbling ‘cause thoughts of you will brace my tumbling down its breakless bend. Namyh [This message has been edited by Namyh (11-24-2019 03:39 PM).] |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Sounds like someone is smitten, & wallowing happily in the bliss.  Nicely done Namyh Sky~ Autumn.. |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Sky - There's nothing like being smitten and wallowing in the bliss. It's right next door to Heaven. I think I'll stay a while and now I'm kinda glad my best luggage came with me. LOL. Thanks Sky for stopping in with your 'touch'. Namyh |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I really like the rhythm you've incorporated into this one Namyh. All your poems I find "singable" which to me is a great thing. |
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