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Are You Listening?
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Are You Listening? |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA 
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Are you listening to me, dearest? Is your heart in tune with mine? Can you taste the flavor of my words- Like some sweet, classic wine? Can you feel the heat of passion- As my words depict a scene? Of a castle in a dream world- And you enthroned, the Queen? Do my visions quite enchant you? As your memory enchants me? Do we while away our hours- In a mindscape, wild and free? Are these words of mine quite foolish? Am I cursed to dream alone? Won’t you join me for a little? Ere the time of dreams is gone? [This message has been edited by Gunslinger (11-01-2019 02:30 PM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Absolutely exquisite, John . . . You have me swooning . . . Such passionate, enchanting, mesmerising words could never be foolish. May the time of dreams never be gone . . . |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Ah, Milady Diana... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You do the gentle side justice, John. Lovely work. |
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