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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
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look for the money always look for the money first then find fury disguised as passion they go hand in hand Laurel and Hardy kinda thing either way control is the name of the game always money gives you unheard of control unheard of rage is control on speed the two, lovers in a parked car the poor have one thing over the moneyed sex, a non-discrimination thing rich people have sex, the poor have momentous sex the underclass use sex as a leveling tool the poor have orgasms lasting without end it is the only way they can compete moneyed or poor nothing is quite like it is portrayed we all know the preacher preaches again physical craving |lust is the evil of evils headline in the paper minister caught with prostitute honesty, is it necessary for continued happiness although lies come easily far better to look someone in the eye telling the truth even if it might hurt momentarily don't allow lies become who you are the world is dangerous are you safe if you have intersected with yourself intersected? what's that? meaning to be as one with your doppelganger thwarting danger the whole you, foiling looming menace by DNA so! you will be safe because of the intersection of self and spirit can you say "above it all" you can if you but attend to the metaphysical you the abstract inner you waiting patiently for you to find it without control you twist in the wind without physical satisfaction frustration forevermore conceding honesty is better overall brings about intersection of all that is you these combined parts of you; perfection ©February 6, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-10-2017 10:15 PM).] |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
You cover most, if not all the 'bases' in your poem of "Perfection" Mr. Bolton, but this?: quote:I'm ready to unload all my cash to lower my standard of living and raise my 'opportunities'...along with something else!  Great work! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . Picky, picky, picky, P.U. Heh.Heh ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Hey! I really like those lines! I wanna be even MORE poor than I already am to capitalize on all that "momentous" sex! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Okay P.U . . . Whatever the hell happened to poetical license? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-10-2017 10:58 PM).] |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Nothing that I know of Mr. Bolton, past having to have insurance nowadays. Sometimes I feel like I'm in a wine press! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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