»
Main Forums
»
Open Poetry #50
»
The Lonely Last Dance
| Open Poetry #50 |
|
The Lonely Last Dance |
|
|
P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
“One-two-three, one-two-three, oh won’t you dance with me”… Remember those great times when the dance bands would play all those great tunes and we’d make up those rhymes to go along with the music? Darling, for these sixty and five years you’ve been beside me never wavering in your love and support. You were always the first to say, “it’ll all work out”, or, “let’s just wait and see”. Now as we always knew it would honey, the ‘last dance’ is calling. I can’t hold you for this one my darling, for the last dance is always danced alone. I see you now, as I always have, and always will... Beautiful. Goodbye my darling. I love you. I’ll miss you. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
||
| © Copyright 2017 Phineas Ulysses Stinkenbaum - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh! This touches every nerve in my body. So sorry, my friend, I quite understand what you are going through. Mine passed away eight years ago . . . Peace . . . That is one word I hardly ever use because it is so overused, but it fits here. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
||
|
P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Your comments are always appreciated Mr. Bolton and never outdated, overused or overcooked...not on my posts! Many thanks again! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
||
|
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello pU, dance is made for two, your words are touching , like life always does, simply wonderful yann |
||
|
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
PU, This one brought tears to this ole girls eyes. Wasn't expecting to take one to the heart this morning. But you know what? Just goes to show I've not grown jaded in these matters and that I'm happy about ~L |
||
|
P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you yann for your sensitive reply. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
||
|
P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you for your emotional response Lori Rhoden. You're very kind. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...james |
||
|
P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you James! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
