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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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Verse 1 It is Dying more than Living When it feels that you are Leaves you gasping instead of breathing Consumes your life thus far Pre-Chorus: You're Dying more than Living Now with everyday so it seems Dying isn't really living That's what depression brings Chorus: Depression forever makes it real People asking don't understand why All the things you hear, see, and feel Tomorrow is just one more day to die Verse 111 Come tomorrow just another day You have to fight to survive Don't listen to what the voices say If you wanna keep yourself alive Bridge: Tried their drugs and therapies They helped to some extent With Depression there are no immunities So powerful is this disease - suicidal intent Chorus: Depression forever makes it real People asking never understand why All the things you hear, see, and feel Tomorrow is just another day to die Verse IV You're Dying more than Living More than ever so it seems Dying just isn't living Its what depression brings Verse V With tomorrow its just another day You will have to fight to survive Don't give in to what the voices say If you're going to keep yourself alive Pre-Chorus: You are Dying more than Living Because it feels that you are Your gasping instead of breathing Controls your life this far Chorus: Depression forever makes it real People asking can't understand why All the things you hear, see, and feel Tomorrow is just one more day to die Just one more day to Die Just one more day to Die Another day to Die |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Inspired-8...I see and feel many positive feelings within your poem. I know there is no quick fix to depression, but there is hope. Keep writing my friend and it may help more than you realize. Your words will remain within my heart forever...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Thank you Paul, for my case there is no cure anti-depressants lessen its intensity but my poems are my catharsis along with my cats and bass guitars lol thanks again. cheers Victor |
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