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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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Michigan

0 posted 2019-08-30 07:11 PM



When life becomes an endless series of
Shallow breaths
Stay quiet
Walk slowly
Wear your"hush"like a shroud
View life through a spiders web
Skewed
And continue to take
Shallow breaths

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augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
1 posted 2019-08-31 03:45 AM


Seraphin, This was Lovely..it whispers
beautifully down the page.

Much enjoyed,
Sky~

A Poem Begins as a
Lump in the Throat,
A Sense of Wrong,
A Home-Sickness,
A Love-Sickness.


~Robert Frost

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2019-08-31 07:11 AM


much enjoyed yann, sometimes breathing can be that way


yann

Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2019-08-31 12:03 PM


Seraphin...I will remember your words always. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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