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ankledeep/halfawake
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ankledeep/halfawake |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
ankledeep/halfawake ankledeep/halfawake take the morning with a side dish of unconsciousness I get the message, I get semaphore flags, but nobody can find me lost in a wooden chest made of the fallen forests of my own sad creation, elation tempered on the mill of experience , flames leaping up my skull dizzied by brown summer haze danced on chestnut afternoons spent like notions from a cracked piggy bank brain thoroughly numbed, I'm not gonna lose the game but win the battle against love and madness mixed like a tequila sunrise flecked with the sands of time I have left myself defenseless and I've wasted loving your desolate ways but it’s my heart to throw away stepping on reality's shoes ankledeep/halfawake |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Flawless. A perfect painting of words. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Souls, Good to read you again, "like notions from a cracked piggy bank brain"..just one of many lines I liked, you are on a roll here. Sky~ A Poem Begins as a |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very pleasant to read, images are sweet and brilliant, the poem is an inside vision that moved me very much ??? yann |
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