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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
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TX, USA

0 posted 2019-08-10 03:32 PM



This Thing Called Love 7/10/2019

I fear that love is highly overrated,
The theme to almost every poem and song.
A thing that once it has been consummated-
Tends to fade away before too long.

A word that should be strong and all consuming-
Established firmly on a bed of trust…
I find to be misused, and that quite often-
Disguising, what in truth, is merely lust.

Be careful how you term those strong emotions.
Deceptive words will oft deceive the heart-
And leave a person hurt and disillusioned,
The plants from which the bitter viewpoints start.

And bitterness, unchecked, becomes a poison-
Defiling everything it comes to touch.
Vindictive and destructive is its nature-
A state that one should fear, and very much.

A moral? I suppose that there should be one:
Never wear your feelings on your sleeve-
Be careful of the words you use with strangers-
If feelings grow too strong, pack up and leave.


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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2019-08-10 06:48 PM


That is very sad, John,and difficult to do . . . and it seems such a waste of happiness to leave when things are going well . . . even if love dies outwardly, it often lives on in bittersweet (sometimes just sweet) memories of both parties.  Endings aren't always bitter, and sometimes endings aren't the end at all.  
Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA
2 posted 2019-08-10 10:55 PM


As Waylon Jennings said in one of his songs:

"Like those big wheels,
I'll keep rolling,
Like the rivers run to the sea-
I would rather-
Leave here knowing,
That I made a fool of love,
Before it made a fool of me."

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