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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2019-08-05 01:06 PM


[The horse and cat in the poem are in Heaven now.  My beloved Flicka went on 28 April 2002 at the age of 37½ and my beloved Tigger went on 26 October 2010 at the age of 15½.]


12 November 2000

No, I will not have my feelings removed
for my pain is me
and life is misery
and joy is but a momentary reprieve.
I will not have my feelings removed
though my tears block my nose
and my head thunders
and my limbs are withered;
though I put my fingers in my ears
when friends recount stories I will not hear;
though I turn off the television
when I cannot face reality;
though I often wonder
if I could do my bit
for disaster victims;
though I know I stand alone;
though I repeatedly try to do
what is right
though it is unnoticed,
unappreciated,
or misinterpreted;
though I do not understand
the selfishness, thoughtlessness and cruelty
of the human race.
No, I will not have my feelings removed
for my pain is me
and life is misery
and joy is but a momentary reprieve.
I will not have my feelings removed
for I will not give up my moments
and I will make
and live
and remember
and wallow
in my moments
of birdsong
and Chopin sonatas
and Wordsworth and Longfellow
and leaf-fringed sunsets
and the bonding gaze of my horse and cat
and I will wash my feelings in my glorious moments.
No, I will not have my feelings removed.

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Gunslinger
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA
1 posted 2019-08-05 05:12 PM


Ah, milady, if it were so simple, I believe I would. Lovely work, Princess.
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2019-08-06 05:56 AM


Thank you for your beautiful reply, John.  It is simpler than you think - not always, but it is always worth it.!  Smiles.  
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