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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2019-07-18 12:49 PM



Wonder seems to me to be-
An emotion meant for youth.
It somehow seems to fade away,
In light of brutal truth.

The lass who longs for dashing knight-
To carry her away…
The lad who dreams of wealth and fame-
Both wind up in dismay.

The hopes and aspirations-
Of those who toil in verse,
Will leave us disillusioned…
It seems that we are cursed:

To be like poor Cassandra-
Whose prophecies were true,
But thoroughly discounted…
It’s the same for me and you.

For we view the world too clearly-
But alas, we realize-
That the truth it is not seeking,
But prefers the balm of lies.

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2019-07-18 02:01 PM


I can be cynical too, sometimes, but I, too, think of "might have beens" and don't believe the goofy feelings are lies.  
augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
2 posted 2019-07-18 02:35 PM


I do understand what you mean here Poet..sometimes we tend to look through
rose colored glasses in our youth,
but I do believe I still see a little glint of Wonder left in those eyes Gs, hope so anyway.


Good read..

Sky~



A Poem Begins as a
Lump in the Throat,
A Sense of Wrong,
A Home-Sickness,
A Love-Sickness.


~Robert Frost

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2019-07-18 11:25 PM


love the way you ended this...hurts a lil, like most good truths I suppose.  
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2019-07-20 03:12 AM


I so relate to this, John.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2019-07-23 11:10 PM


John,
I think you are right about getting to a certain age and a having a dampening of your sense of wonder. Maybe that is the price you pay for wisdom.  On the other hand, you could just get jaded. Good thoughts here. ~L

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