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Send Me a Star
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Send Me a Star |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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30 March 2018 Send me, my love, a shooting star from your sparkle-night afar and I will ride it back to you over ocean of deepest blue, a magical flight across the skies to bond with you through depth of eyes. What happy hours we’ll spend at last, our hearts apounding firm and fast, together in our private world, our dreams realised and now unfurled, a day and night we will be as one through dawn of day and set of sun, my hand in yours, your eyes in mine, now hearts and souls and arms entwined. We’ll whisper kisses soft and sweet in ears, on eager lips and cheek, and we’ll recall our happy tears in softest raindrops down the years. Our sensusous breath we will be feeling in touch of breezes soft and healing, a masterpiece of all our thoughts and all the anguish distance brought, we’ll paint with Nature’s softest brush and stroke in future evening’s hush. If only this could come to be . . . but see what we have . . . eternally! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
yes, always there is eternity. |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Well penned, Diana. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Charly for reading and commenting. Presumably that is sarcasm (not complaining either way). |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, John. I am glad you thought so. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Owl, Enjoyed this lovely Romantic piece.. with Rhyme-Sublime.  Sky~ A Poem Begins as a |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, AugustSky. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
No, not sarcasm. Simply stating the reality of existence. We yearn for the full passions of the present; sometimes, in the moment, that for which we want, crave, pray, is out of reach in the moment's soft reality...yet, always there is eternity. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Charly. I'm glad it wasn't sarcasm. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Owl, This is so romantic! A very sweet piece of work here. I enjoyed it very much! Thank you. ~L |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thamk you, Lori, for your lovely response. |
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