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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2019-06-17 05:16 AM

Here we have a sphere
with corners.
Dark secret corners
of hidden knowledge,
forbidden knowledge
with the musty odor of age about it...
just waiting
for that beam of light
to strike the darkness
with magick...
once again.

Ida Werrett

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

1 posted 2019-07-01 01:32 PM

Ida, I thought this was intriguingly
Good.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2019-07-03 10:11 PM

Nailed it to the wall, Ida! One may have to be a certain age to feel, understand how deep inside its anchored.

And to know the longing from which it springs . . .

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2019-07-04 01:23 PM

Ida,
Fantastic food for thought! An enlightened appetizer. Enjoyed! ~L

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2019-07-04 09:19 PM

Ida...Spooky but intriguing thoughts.
Waiting for that beam of light to me brings this poem together. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2019-07-05 05:40 PM

Thanks for reading nand commenting. I so enjoy the opinions of my fellow poets.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2019-07-14 01:34 AM

This is an intriguing piece of work, Ida. there is a mystery to it, yet a demanding quality that speaks to us of a deeply ingrained truth we all should know of already.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2019-07-14 02:02 AM

Thank you all for the kind remarks. I enjoy the opinions of my fellow poets very much.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2019-07-14 02:03 AM

Thank you all for the kind remarks. I enjoy the opinions of my fellow poets very much.

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