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Sunday Choices |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sunday Choices The fog is very clear. It states "Instinct Required" "Clear Senses" "Enter at Your Own Risk" It gives you choices on a Sunday. Does one stay warm and dry, or explore the gray shroud, become one with the chill, the damp? Decisions. (c) KRJ, 4-7-19 |
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bbynams Junior Member Posts 49 |
How do you feel about deer meat? |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi Sunshine, enjoyed this read! |
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bbynams Junior Member Posts 49 |
Are you famous yet? I wonder if you can hear yourself sometimes. |
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bbynams Junior Member Posts 49 |
You know what book I liked that you probably would too? The Outsider. Read through the whole thing without a headache. Really entertaining actually. Last year about this time. Not that you have to, but sometimes people who like to write like reading too. Or maybe not! |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Excellent treatment, milady. Tell me, did you answer those questions> :-) |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
I must be missing something in "babynamms" comments. lol |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem speaks clearly, to live each day fully, to be grateful, not to look back or forward but to rejoice. Or so was my take. Great to be reading you these days, sunshiney one. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...loving the comments. Babynams, yes, I try to hear myself talk. And I love reading. I will look up your referral. Coco, thank you. It's good to have some time to enjoy the blue pages. Slinger, Yes, in a way, I did make a decision. Blues...sending hugs. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Depends on the mood, I guess. Better yet, write a poem about it. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You opening line is classic. Story of my life, truly. And while literally, I have to drive 90 miles to work and much of it it mountains so fog is truly the enemy, I love the layers of this poem and the ways it can be taken. We all have to have to face that gray shroud eventually, don't we? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, Michael!  |
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