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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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22 November 2018 Her eyes slipped away over hazy mountains and her faint smile painted long ago on her agéd face. She wrapped the comforting hug of her independence, freedom and solitude closely around her as she did the summer sunshine. Her thoughts rode high on fluffy clouds in an azure sky and time, in reverence to her, waited and words were whispered on wafts of wind and beauty of birdsong and soft-smile remembrance in the summer sunshine. She wondered whether he ever thought of her too. She didn’t want him back, but needed the bittersweet memories like chocolates after tears. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so sweet and heartfelt. I really enjoyed the sentiment.  |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Haunting, very poignant milady. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Blues for your kind and compassionate reply. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, John for your beautiful reply. Some things have to end, but the beauty, connection, memories and regret of loss remain. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Gorgeous write Owl, the feelings here linger..as Good Poems always do.  Enjoyed.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, AugustSky for your kind words. |
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