Woman to Man...a Few of Our Favorite Things

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augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US

0 posted 2019-01-23 01:40 AM

Woman to Man..
a Few of Our Favorite Things~

The sound of his walk
across a hardwood floor,
a self assured low voice
that can stir the deep
of a woman,
his way of trying to ease
each worry,
determined he can fix
any broken part.

So many emotions he hides
in those eyes,
we love to read them.
Strong hands that instantly
wear the glove of tender,
and if sincere, can kiss away
a tear like no other.

His humor,
especially in moments unaware,
we find endearingly funny,
we need a man who can make
us laugh...
and cheers to his wit,
with a hint of tease
that reddens our cheeks
at any age.

When he nuzzles in the shine
of our hair,
his heartbeat warming back,
that's our ambrosia,
a woman feels your need
long before the touch,
its wild plea..
a musk of desire upon the wind.

If he truly sees and loves
the sparkle of her eye and soul,
she will trace his spine with
thank you notes written in tongue,
shame the moon with you,
and when rainy nights accompany
the dance, after glow apparent,
there is nothing like the breathing
of a satisfied man,
love surrounds his roughness,
and woman stretches long
into contentment.

©Augustsky

[This message has been edited by augustsky (01-23-2019 03:51 AM).]

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2019-01-23 01:52 AM

quote:
"...there is nothing like the breathing
of a satisfied man,
love surrounds his roughness,
and woman stretches long
into contentment"

In the finality of the day, this of yours I quote, says it all.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2019-01-23 03:38 AM

Sky,
This was beautifully written. And so true, if they only knew...insightful writing Lady! ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2019-01-24 07:46 PM

There are so many different things which bring women and men together, Sky . . .

Sometimes it is difficult to "see" it, but it is there front and center, if we would only look.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2019-01-24 09:54 PM

Love that long stretch. Your poetry is breathtaking on so many levels. So nice..so very beautiful Sky gal.

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

5 posted 2019-01-24 10:51 PM

Thank you Bluesy, men need to know how we feel.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

6 posted 2019-01-24 10:55 PM

L, Thank you, think they need to hear it more often, especially these days.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

7 posted 2019-01-24 10:56 PM

I agree Jerrypat, Thanks for the look-see.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

8 posted 2019-01-24 10:59 PM

BluesSerenade, You're so sweet/cool at the same time

Thank you, glad you liked.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

9 posted 2019-01-25 03:38 PM

A feel good poem from start to finish dear Sky ~ Absolutely love it!
Hugz
Alana

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

10 posted 2020-07-03 08:13 AM

A few ingredients for love are in this for sure. This has such a sweet flow, and is a great tribute to the little things that are actually big things. Lovely.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

11 posted 2020-07-03 07:47 PM

Sky...Don't know how I missed this way back when, but sure am glad it was given a new life. Your words will surely consume your favorite man like a fine wine on a rainy night can warm your heart. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

12 posted 2020-07-03 08:51 PM

Poetry at its purest. A textured perfection this one is.

Michael

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

13 posted 2020-07-06 10:28 PM

Thank you my friend Alana

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

14 posted 2020-07-06 10:31 PM

Temptress, Thank you for bringing this one
out of the attic

pleased you liked.

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

15 posted 2020-07-06 10:33 PM

Poet Paul..part of your reply was like a
Poem within itself, Thank you much.

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

16 posted 2020-07-06 10:36 PM

Michael, One of the Dearest replies I've
ever received Thank you.

Sky~

Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

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