A Cold Knight In Hell: Despite His Doubts, The Queen Told Him To Take A Whack At It..

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Open Poetry #50

A Cold Knight In Hell: Despite His Doubts, The Queen Told Him To Take A Whack At It..

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2019-01-18 12:04 PM

Within his armored headpiece,
the Knights' eyes peer out
From the dark world inside him
to a darker world without

His moment of glory
may soon come to be
His lance firm and steady,
his fears have been freed

To his lady-in-waiting
he's distant and cold
A Knight knows his fate,
and seldom grows old

Hooves dig deep as his steed
sets his course,
while another rides hard
on a galloping horse

'Til the clash of steel lances
drown out those of the screams.
and a lady-in-waiting
parts with her dreams

(No ambiguous or sesquipedalian words were used or harmed in the production of this poem)

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2019-01-18 04:06 AM

Oh thank God Bluesy, I was so worried about those poor sesquipedalian words. They can be so fragile. Bless your kind heart. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2019-01-18 04:13 AM

What I do I do for you, Miss Lori.

...sometimes.

Thanks for the look-see

...just bein' Bluesy

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

3 posted 2019-01-18 04:54 PM

Bluesy...That dirty old knight is up to no good I bet. Heard the Prince had a crash with his car today 98 years old and driving, they should take his license away. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2019-01-18 06:04 PM

Hey! Thanks for the read and your comments, Paul!

Much obliged!

...just bein' Bluesy

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