Open Poetry #50 |
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...Go on Faith |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Scorched sand sizzled hot with a blister. Rising heat sucked the air out the day and the motionless sun like an unblinking eye poked bones and my brains in its way. I buckled to my knees from exhaustion then my face hit the sand full flat. Without water, each breath was a dry pain hurtin’ and my blood thickened more from its lack. A pump handle shimmered in the day’s heat and I focused, crawling to it ‘cross the land. Hanging there was a sign, “Go North five feet. Dig for water in a box in the sand.” Scratched eyes searched frantic for its pinpoint. Charred fingers clawed the sand going deep. As I dug with a frenzy, then I felt something hard. Had I liquid for some tears, I would weep. In the box, I found a bottle full of water. “Don’t Drink” said the jug’s top sign. “Pour half, prime the pump then wait five. Pour the other half in, pump nine.” I blistered in my madness for the water. Five minutes more of thirst was too great. I twisted off the lid and I tilted up the jug but those words “Don’t Drink” made me wait. After nine pumps, I fell against the handle. Liquid sputtered then it spurted from the spout. I was drenched and wallowed, bathed and swallowed in water, sweet by words I rued to doubt. And on the bottom of the bottle was a clear sign, “Fill this bottle for the box, please do, for the next soul searching for a Life-raft who may have to go on Faith like you!” Namyh |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Go on faith...That says it all my friend ~ A wonderful story poem and message. Much enjoyed! Alana ![]() |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
quote:I fully agree with Miss Pinky, Namyh. So many vivid images, but this early one in your poem captured desert memories. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Alana - Faith! You're right...it does kinda say it all. Always good to hear from the one and only PiP. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Bluesy - Rising heat has indeed been known to suck the air from a desert floor as it did, in my youth, from the concrete streets of a big city baking in heat. Mighty glad and proud you enjoyed this work. Namyh |
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