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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2019-01-11 04:02 PM


An oldie, but . . .


its in mans genes, DNA
where he has grown
ready to procreate
consuming much of his time
on the how and maybe of it
it is his seed
he boldly offers
fertilization
the mysterious womb of life to give
when the rigid
thought process becomes turgid and severely
bent out of shape
straining with midnight's itch
taking pride
charming the woman flower
diluting passions flow into the walls of heaven
the walls close around
the intruder
craving the touch of the life giver
ahhh . . .
there are a few things which cause us to ponder
some are . . .
the ways of the birds in the sky
a tongue flicking,  tail rattling diamondback rattlesnake
a roiling, boiling ocean
but best of all
are the look in a woman's eyes
moments before
entry

(c)August 20, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2019 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
1 posted 2019-01-11 06:43 PM


Jerrypat, Sensuous write, yet telling it
right from the core.

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2019-01-11 10:31 PM


Makes me think how overrated time is, Jerry,
and how irrelevant it can be...at times.
quote:
"charming the woman flower
diluting passions flow into the walls of heaven"
Each morsel in your poetry makes a meal
Ah! "Dinner for two!

There is no reading this without feeling this.
Splendor in blue.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2019-01-12 02:51 PM


I thank you profusely, Sky, for your gracious comment. "Splendor in blue," indeed.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI
4 posted 2019-01-12 05:20 PM


A wonderful write as always Jerry ~ Much enjoyed my visit
Alana

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
5 posted 2019-01-13 06:03 PM


You're quite welcome, Jerry...It was a pleasure!

...just bein' Bluesy

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