Open Poetry #50 |
The Ebb and Glow |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
An oldie, but . . . its in mans genes, DNA where he has grown ready to procreate consuming much of his time on the how and maybe of it it is his seed he boldly offers fertilization the mysterious womb of life to give when the rigid thought process becomes turgid and severely bent out of shape straining with midnight's itch taking pride charming the woman flower diluting passions flow into the walls of heaven the walls close around the intruder craving the touch of the life giver ahhh . . . there are a few things which cause us to ponder some are . . . the ways of the birds in the sky a tongue flicking, tail rattling diamondback rattlesnake a roiling, boiling ocean but best of all are the look in a woman's eyes moments before entry (c)August 20, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Jerrypat, Sensuous write, yet telling it right from the core. ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Makes me think how overrated time is, Jerry, and how irrelevant it can be...at times. quote:Each morsel in your poetry makes a meal Ah! "Dinner for two! There is no reading this without feeling this. Splendor in blue. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I thank you profusely, Sky, for your gracious comment. "Splendor in blue," indeed. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
A wonderful write as always Jerry ~ Much enjoyed my visit Alana |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
You're quite welcome, Jerry...It was a pleasure! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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