Open Poetry #50 |
Moon Addict |
augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
"The night walked down the sky with the moon in her hand " Fredric Lawrence Knowles Moon Addict~ Waxing crescent a silver slice of addiction, the so slender arc of what could be, a tease of light.. a please of light.. that hangs almost touchable against a wish-upon-a-star-night. In moon struck stare bathed and seduced, its glow a slow drip to skin, and landscape. Twist the iridescent wedge.. wring poem and pleasure, rain-barrel the quicksilver promise in the dark, squeeze the cut cantaloupe to mouth, its tip heavy with juice of the ages, lips smack of Moon-Soul, come taste my kiss.. ©Augustsky |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wow! wonderfully written, seductively so and those last four words . . . walk outside, my friend, look up at the moon under which I'm standing. Close your eyes and feel. . . my reply. j. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
No other celestial has inspired lovers and poetry so much as the Moon. Its silvery influence may cool the night...Ah! But it warms the heart. As does your poetry, Miss Sky. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
LOVE THIS!! You gave the moon her heavenly due with this one! Way to go girlfriend! ~L |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
What a Moon-a-licious reply J.! suddenly I'm hungry for a moon-pie. Thank you.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
So true Bluesy, I've had a crush on that ole' moon for a long time. Thank you.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thanks L. I Love Moon-writes, never tire of them. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello dear Sky ~ From one moon addict to another I loved this!!! Always a pleasure to read you. Hope you and your family had a wonderful holiday. Hugz Alana |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Pink Alana..You're always a breath of fresh air Thank you fellow moon-addict. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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