Open Poetry #50 |
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Moon Addict |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US ![]() |
"The night walked down the sky with the moon in her hand " Fredric Lawrence Knowles Moon Addict~ Waxing crescent a silver slice of addiction, the so slender arc of what could be, a tease of light.. a please of light.. that hangs almost touchable against a wish-upon-a-star-night. In moon struck stare bathed and seduced, its glow a slow drip to skin, and landscape. Twist the iridescent wedge.. wring poem and pleasure, rain-barrel the quicksilver promise in the dark, squeeze the cut cantaloupe to mouth, its tip heavy with juice of the ages, lips smack of Moon-Soul, come taste my kiss.. ©Augustsky |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wow! wonderfully written, seductively so and those last four words . . . walk outside, my friend, look up at the moon under which I'm standing. Close your eyes and feel. . . my reply. j. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
No other celestial has inspired lovers and poetry so much as the Moon. Its silvery influence may cool the night...Ah! But it warms the heart. As does your poetry, Miss Sky. ![]() ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
LOVE THIS!! You gave the moon her heavenly due with this one! Way to go girlfriend! ~L |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
What a Moon-a-licious reply J.! ![]() suddenly I'm hungry for a moon-pie. Thank you.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
So true Bluesy, I've had a crush on that ole' moon for a long time. Thank you.. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thanks L. I Love Moon-writes, never tire of them. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello dear Sky ~ From one moon addict to another I loved this!!! Always a pleasure to read you. Hope you and your family had a wonderful holiday. Hugz Alana ![]() |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Pink Alana..You're always a breath of fresh air ![]() Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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