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Cemetery Wind
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Cemetery Wind |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US 
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Cemetery Wind~ It blows cold on this little hill, cemetery wind shudders trees, stalks icy ridges and forgotten leaves. This year a pinecone & evergreen cross is laid, so stunning against the snow. Words are finger traced upon stone, tears fall, thoughts coddle next to memory for the one who loved unconditionally. In leaving chill hunches shoulders, a kiss to lips then pressed to her name, Oh..what I wouldn't give this silent-night.. for the warmth of her voice, a cup of her coffee, and our tablecloth-talk. (c)Augustsky |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sky, This just as well could have been a video, so vivid a picture you created. It brought tears to my eyes. Bless your heart, this is beautiful. What a special Christmas gift for her in remembrance. ~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Poignantly, beautifully written my friend. A wonderful tribute. j. |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Frickin’ PHENOMENAL writing. I continue to be delighted by your work. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
augustsky...You have such a way with words, They could only come from your heart. Beautiful tribute to a loved one...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
That you could see it in your minds eye means a lot, Thank you much Lori. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
J, Thank you friend for the sweet comments. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Souldrifter, Your 'fricken' made me grin  Thank you..glad you liked. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Paul, Thank you for saying that, so lovely. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Oh..what I wouldn't give this silent-night.. for the warmth of her voice, a cup of her coffee, and our tablecloth-talk. reminds me of my mom, and yes, what I wouldn't give for a moment with her again... we were so close and used to have such long conversations... thank you for writing such a beautiful memory. |
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