»
Main Forums
»
Open Poetry #50
»
October 1986
| Open Poetry #50 |
|
October 1986 |
|
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
|
Notably, I cannot deny, the telling of re-telling it was a blueprint for reckless heart beats, beating as the odor of some lame excuse an undertow devouring life’s mysterious shillings prowess of a wild delusional hurricane forced abandoned romance when morning opened revealing lives that intersected with insightful quotes…. You know the ones, that poke & prod your side, ...forever questions the mind of misery & doubt with incredible pain to sacrifice everything for that deep-rooted aggressor which grows jealous subletting to darkness and rain remarkable how some bring inspiration to mind’s eyes dancing with the premise of beautiful perspectives in vain in that one moment, on the edge of saying “yes” to lullabies relying on the throws of a historical intensity, crying acid rain like a sponge screaming, the deepest ink of mid-night blues sometimes when you think you win you really loose harnessing justification for the existence of summer’s cocaine a teen’s great prologue absorbed & leaped a meaningful appetite clever, this ancient oak, that groaned beneath her waves of tears incessantly tracing the silhouette of all those echoing oversights You know the ones, those pretty wide-eyed dreams…. Never…..ever….. to know…the art of listening…. sometimes when you think you lose you really win Lee J (how come so many people always miss the J?) My name is Lee J. [This message has been edited by LeeJ (12-06-2018 06:43 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2018 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Lee, A Wise & Wonderful write.. 'those wide eyed dreams'..yes, how cloudy they can be, & looking back we can sometimes see most clearly. Well done, Sky~ |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Thank you for the eyes & kind comment Sky.... psssst....my name is Lee J. :0) |
||
|
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
er, uhmmm, LEEJ, I for one (whew) have never called you just plain old Lee, (that's a totally unqualified statement because, sometimes, I don't know what has come out of my mouth! Until someone puts a spike in my brow.) Anyway, LeeJ, I really like the way this piece read, and enjoyed the second read too, but like several of yours, I don't always quite understand what you've said; an idea, sure, but sometimes you just get beyond my addled brain. I still read everything that comes across with your name on it though, just so you know. j. |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ok then...Lee J. You still got it girl. |
||
|
EvaRoss Junior Member Posts 22 |
I was most bedazzled on your very soulful and vivid journey |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
jwesley, I am so thankful for people as yourself, who not only take much time to contemplate and read my poems, but have also never called me "Just Plain Lee". haha....and I certainly hope no one ever puts a spike in your brow? Let me atem....lol Thanks so much for reading and commenting... |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Thank you Bluesy, greatly appreciate the read and your kind comment...hope your doing well.... |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
EvaRose.... what a pretty name, we have an Ella Rose in the family.... thank you for the read... |
||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry, you'll not be able to say that to me any more. I am sorry. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Whot's wrong with "jst plsin old Lee? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
