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augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

0 posted 2018-11-20 03:33 PM

Through Hazel Eyes~

Did I imagine your voice..
your tongue touching the roof
of your mouth, forming the L
of that powerful word..
your thoughts pressed between
pages of poetry, unfolded and shared
on nights when the moon tugged your soul,
and lit your eyes silver..
some things are meant to be fleeting,
touched for a season,
paving the heart for its continued journey.

At the crest of the hill
someone calls my name..
low and sweet,
in a way I've never heard before,
a voice that knows the color of my eyes,
where my fears like to hide,
being led from the clamor,
as each eyelid is kissed,
and I'm lifted to higher ground.

©Augustsky

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2018-11-20 04:46 PM

a very beautiful tribute to Love,

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2018-11-20 06:15 PM

I agree with yann. This is a magnificent undertaking, sky, which touched me magnificently.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

3 posted 2018-11-21 04:47 PM

Thank you Yann for the read & your nice reply.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

4 posted 2018-11-21 04:49 PM

Jerrypat, Truly appreciate your generous reply.

Thank you Poet..
Sky

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2018-11-25 02:14 PM

Great piece, again. Its refreshing to read you. Really, really like
". . . in a way I've never heard before,
a voice that knows the color of my eyes,
where my fears like to hide,
being led from the clamor,. . . "

j.

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

6 posted 2018-11-26 02:51 AM

'Refreshing'..is such a great compliment,
Thank you J.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2018-11-26 07:43 AM

Dearest Sky,
I read this awhile ago and would have sworn I commented (dang my memory). Maybe I got frustrated looking for a word to do it justice. I'm still struggling. It has a sweetness about it, but it is much more rich and full and deep so that word just wouldn't do. Maybe Romantic if written in calligraphy?
Just know I love it! ~L

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

8 posted 2018-11-26 10:55 PM

L, Your replies are funny/wonderful, Thank you.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

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