Open Poetry #50 |
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Hushed |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US ![]() |
Hushed~ Hushed by his tenderness, yet alive and vocal by a knowing lovers stroke, silk whispers spinning webs to catch each private sigh. That kind of man who can silence sobs, absorb them through his chest, then kiss your hair, and it isn't a white knight dream, he tastes of salt with rough hands, yet he smoothes love across a womans soul. ©Augustsky [This message has been edited by augustsky (11-12-2018 12:23 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Very well done, sensuous to the soul of a woman. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Lovely write, love what you did here. Well done. I can see I’m gonna enjoy reading you. ![]() |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice write,Ms Sky. Enticing, smooth read. Enjoyed it! JL ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautiful, love me tender kind of poem. Welcome to the blue sea, sky. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
JerryPat, Thank you for the read & sweet comment. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thank you Souldrifter, I've enjoyed reading you as well. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
JL, Thanks for the dear reply. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
BluesS. Liked that description, & Thank you for the warm welcome. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sky, Here is another one I let slip by me. Let me just say this, I love the way YOU have with LOVE! ~L |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Thanks L. means a lot. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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