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augustsky
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midwest US

0 posted 2018-11-11 07:07 PM


Hushed~

Hushed by his tenderness,

yet alive and vocal

by a knowing lovers stroke,

silk whispers spinning webs

to catch each private sigh.


That kind of man

who can silence sobs,

absorb them through his chest,

then kiss your hair,

and it isn't a white knight dream,

he tastes of salt with rough hands,

yet he smoothes love

across a womans soul.

©Augustsky

[This message has been edited by augustsky (11-12-2018 12:23 AM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2018-11-11 08:08 PM


Very well done, sensuous to the soul of a woman.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado
2 posted 2018-11-15 03:56 PM


Lovely write, love what you did here.

Well done. I can see I’m gonna enjoy reading you.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2018-11-15 04:31 PM


Nice write,Ms Sky.
Enticing, smooth read.
Enjoyed it!

JL

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2018-11-15 10:32 PM


Beautiful, love me tender kind of poem.  

Welcome to the blue sea, sky.

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
5 posted 2018-11-17 12:27 PM


JerryPat, Thank you for the read & sweet comment.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
6 posted 2018-11-17 12:29 PM


Thank you Souldrifter, I've enjoyed reading you as well.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
7 posted 2018-11-17 12:30 PM


JL, Thanks for the dear reply.


Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
8 posted 2018-11-17 12:32 PM


BluesS. Liked that description, & Thank you
for the warm welcome.


Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
9 posted 2018-11-26 07:48 AM


Sky, Here is another one I let slip by me.
Let me just say this, I love the way YOU have with LOVE! ~L

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
10 posted 2018-11-26 10:52 PM


Thanks L. means a lot.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

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