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ptime
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0 posted 2018-11-18 11:21 AM


if looks could kill 18.11.18

love the intrigue
but look who is talking
not in same league
half a dozen times and still walking.
feeble threats not hidden
ducker and diver and a floozy
my kind of poetry maybe forbidden
to take it out you need a uzi.
keep looking
maybe a advert in hour rush crush
poetry in demand get booking
the thought is giving me a hot flush.
grateful for the devotion
poetry world i want to spill
want to advertise where village has emotion
it stopped because looks did kill.

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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2018-11-18 05:02 PM


loved it, i think too there are terrible looks
yann

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