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Open Poetry #50
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Inspired-8
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Pluto
0 posted 2018-08-24 05:30 AM


Voices cryptic
Feelings veiled
Images depicted
Hauntingly detailed

Screaming notions
Crying endless
Dark emotions
Left defenceless

Living breathing
Useless trying
Depression feeding
On you dying....

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2018-08-24 12:53 PM

sounds like he or she, isn't what you wanted her/him to be?  Or thought that person was...powerful words weaved together bringing out a truly painful conclusion.
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