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Loving You - Whole
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Loving You - Whole |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Loving You - Whole I’ll hold your heart until it no longer beats. I’ll breathe the air along with you, until it no longer passes by. I’ll see the stars that you see, the sun when it rises, and when it sets I’ll be there too. I’ll smile and I’ll laugh along with you, cry if you feel the need to, and when the day comes and you fly with the Angels, I’ll be standing there beside you, wishing I could be there . . . Too.
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Amazigly wishful write, my friend. I love it when you write of your thoughts on romance. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jimmy, When you write this way, as you often do, it always makes me think, HE knows real love! You write of a relationship we can relate and aspire to. ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is so poignant, true love can be described have a nice day yann |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The fairy tales have their version of love... but this... this is real, this is lasting... this is what makes all the mistakes/kissed frogs worthwhile. This is love - and you've written it so beautifully I'm typing through tears. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a lovely promise to the love of your life. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thank you everyone for your read and your comments. Jerry, Lori and Yann...you guys are always there which is wonderful . . . Lori, wrote this for my wife of 44 years . . . just because we've had those years and still looking forward to quite a few more, good times and bad (well not so much the bad) - but we always come through, together. And it made my day to see suthern and LeeJ - Hello there Ladies, and now if I could just hear from Marge - I'd be spooked, but, yeah, you know what I mean. jimmy |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
A sweet romantic write for your wife  Much enjoyed your heart words J ~ Alana |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, jwesley, I miss Marge, Earth Angel, Balladeer, Toerag...they were indeed special....it's great reading you... |
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