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Open Poetry #50
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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
0 posted 2018-07-28 01:51 PM

My lovely ladies,
When you say yes,
Your eyes are more attractive
They are blessed by stars,
They caress our sails,
My lovely ladies
When you say yes,
The sun looks at you,
And God keeps me,
Because I cherish the hope,
You are more attractive
When your eyes say yes.
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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
1 posted 2018-07-30 01:02 PM

Whoa! Yeah, I'd say so . . . you nailed it my friend...

j.
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2018-07-30 05:07 PM

thanks jwesley, this is encouraging


yann
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