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Just Curious - A Bayou Love Song
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Just Curious - A Bayou Love Song |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I ran to her within my wanderlust to the rhythm of her own down and dirty dreams are forever sanctified with my holy hearts’ beat I sought the vision of her intuitive acuity looking into my inner never shuttered heart’s skylight allowing the light to once and for all break through so totally my mouth slightly open she surrendered completely fused with my essences’ forever hug now it was radiance merging with joie de vivre hearts overflowing for once the world stood still we breathed as one ©January 30, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This love poem has a great Spiritual quality to it. It seems to express love in its purest form devoid of the lesser lust.  ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, thank you Lori, for your kind thoughts turned into words. I ran across your poetry book yesterday and have been thumbing my way through it You are amazing with words, but I knew that already ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm glad you are enjoying my book! I have had a good response to it from family and friends. ~L |
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