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RC Frazier
Junior Member
Posts 19
Colorado

0 posted 2018-06-04 01:09 AM

Here comes the moon
With silvery face
The shadows run and hide
And tethered to the stars that tug
It seems all heaven is on her side

But you are far from me this night
So I wonder, as through your eyes
You see the same moon just as bright
And think of me as a lover’s swoon

I can barely take your absence
Though a poet said it makes us fond
And appreciate the times together
Let me say I’d much the rather
Always and forever have you near

Always and forever
That would make me fond
Because without you, I fear
Even with the moon a rising
She’s not as bright as when you’re here

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2018-06-06 04:12 PM

nicely done, may be the moon, is a mirror for both of you, hope it is

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2018-06-06 10:42 PM

Wish I had been mentally able to write such a poem when I was having trouble
with my martial and relationship love affairs. Very well constructed.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

3 posted 2018-06-12 10:30 AM

Welcome to pip, fellow Coloradan. I really enjoyed this, looking forward to more. Nice!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2018-06-12 03:10 PM

sounds like a very heartfelt poem. Best wishes.
Hugs, Ethel
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Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

5 posted 2018-06-18 01:42 AM

Pleased to meet you RC Such a lovely and romantic poem ~ Enjoyed reading and look forward to more from your pen ~ Alana

RC Frazier
Junior Member
Posts 19
Colorado

6 posted 2018-06-19 12:49 PM

Thanks all!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2018-07-04 06:23 AM

welcome RC and thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts

Clare Ite
Member
Posts 66
Where The Pallet Pins Play

8 posted 2018-07-21 12:39 PM

Indeed, beautiful and heartfelt.

I always have time for you...

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

9 posted 2018-08-12 11:01 AM

Really nicely done. Welcome to Pip. Good to see another person here from Colorado..

"Some men see things as they are, and ask why. I dream of things that never were, and ask why not"--RFK

[This message has been edited by soul drifter (08-13-2018 01:42 AM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

10 posted 2020-07-01 12:39 PM

I know this feeling. I wrote something a while back that has a musing about the absence and fondness saying. I don't buy it any more either. Pardon me while I excavate. Enjoyed.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

11 posted 2020-07-01 01:44 PM

R.C...This reminds me of someone I lost that is so near and dear to me. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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