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Little Blue Diner
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Little Blue Diner |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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There used to be a Big Blue Buffet. Now there is just a Little Blue Diner. The patrons are few but faithful. They are like fixtures, adding to the ambiance. Sometimes, it is just you and me at the counter over coffee. LGR(C)5/26/18 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
. . . and now "it is just you and me at the counter over coffee" is all it is supposed to be. True blue patrons are far and few indeed. I liked this short, but very descriptive poem. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-26-2018 04:09 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Maybe they are waiting for us dinosaurs to die off before they come back. Glad you liked it. ~L |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...reminds me of a place I used to go...james |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lori... Reminds me of a place that time has passed by but still exist because of the regular patrons. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
James and Paul, I sometimes refer to PipTalk as the Big Blue Buffet. This poem is a commentary on how this forum gets a little slim, down to just a couple of people for spells. ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid poem Lori, the atmosphere and images are brilliant, the blue is everywhere yann |
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