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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I am sometimes dizzy, As the flower on its stalk, The flower which is to be cut For its sour beauty; |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
What is sour beauty? ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i guess it is hawkward to be attractive for some young people , not comfortable to seduce, something they pay back, by immaturity , they don't know how to manage seduction, they can be shy or more depressed, that is the idea lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
okay thanks, that's cool, I'm glad I asked. You packed a lot of meaning into those two words. Really insightful poem. ~L |
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