Prestidigitation: She Made It Seem So Real I Could Taste Her...

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Open Poetry #50

Prestidigitation: She Made It Seem So Real I Could Taste Her...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-24 01:11 AM

As this crimson sunset fades,
she comes in tendrils of smoke

Whirling and whispering
from her well-stoked sun embers

She breathes over me gently, sweetly
giving life to this night of ours

She walks through my earth
singing me sweet lullabies

Putting my mind at ease,
making my world ready for sleep

Farewell, my twilight,
I have tasted your sweet kiss...

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2018-04-24 05:50 AM

Bluesey,
You are getting better all the time. This is really good.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2018-04-24 09:00 AM

Beautiful. 'Nuff said, poet.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2018-04-24 12:32 PM

Thanks, Miss Lori...You're very kind.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-04-24 12:34 PM

Thank you, Jerry. I appreciate your comments.

...just bein' Bluesy

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