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Open Poetry #50
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
0 posted 2018-04-23 12:19 PM

She picked at my senses
like a tireless locksmith

Projecting her image
of perfect tanning-bed skin

All the while stretching back
her authentically plastered smile

Outside on the slushy street below
a ‘63 Chrysler passes sounding less like a machine

...and more like a crashing wave

...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-04-23 04:59 AM

Bluesy,
One fantastic line after another here. Seriously, your descriptions are to die for.
If your words were paint, you'd have gallery quality art. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-04-23 09:09 PM

You've sweetened my day, Miss Lori.

Thank you so much!

...just bein' Bluesy
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