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This Delicate Thing We Have
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This Delicate Thing We Have |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Her kiss is worth waiting for, Lips like petals from a rose. Whether we have come together Rightly, or wrongly, We are here, You in your world, I in mine, Together. At night when slumber calls, I lose myself, Wandering among what we have wrought. We have constructed a world, Independent of kith or kin. I think about her more than a little. Our world is so unlimited, And our thoughts can carry us, Infinity stretches beyond our desires, We have boundless possibilities, To let our passions grow. I have deep, deep feelings for her, Some would call that love, I’ll not argue the finer points ©April 11, 2018 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
"I’ll not argue the finer points" Nor will I, Jerry. I enjoyed reading your reflections. Deep and meaningful. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . Don't know how deep and meaningful it is, but every so often I delve into poems about love. They are just figments of my imagination. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
"Our world is so unlimited, And our thoughts can carry us, Infinity stretches beyond our desires, We have boundless possibilities, To let our passions grow. I have deep, deep feelings for her, Some would call that love, I’ll not argue the finer points" ------------------------- I loved all of this, but the above is just wonderful. I'm saving this. I'll remember to never argue the finer points. Well done. |
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