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Open Poetry #50

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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2018-04-18 01:35 AM

     It came as "Surprise!",
     what we discovered that day.
     A spring date for two.

     We were fused in an instant
     and the years did not matter.



     Helen - 18 April 1957
     fused - 18 April 2001

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2018-04-18 02:26 AM

Nor should they matter, Kraw.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2018-04-18 07:46 AM

I'm here to tell you '57 was an excellent year for awesome women. ~L

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2018-04-18 08:26 PM

Love it!

j.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2018-05-17 06:15 PM

Beautiful, Ed! Helen will always be missed.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2018-05-17 07:32 PM

I agree with Lori, '57 was a good year. I graduated High School in '57. And the years awaited me. Loved this cool, quick poem. Direct and very much to the point.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

6 posted 2018-05-19 09:49 AM

Krawdad - This hits home for me. Thanks for sharing. Namyh

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