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Beneath the Boardwalk
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Beneath the Boardwalk |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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she sweet-talked him he followed her under the Boardwalk near the sea tide drifting out clothes quickly shed afterward . . . enticement to spend the night she's dangerously insane aww, but she has such intense blue eyes they melt whatever man they're fixated on they're fixated on him now moments before he is about to tell her he's fresh out of love to allocate she sucks into his intellect and gives the sea a chance to maneuver his thoughts told him she knew he'd dreamed of being her lover always wanted to be with her wherever she wandered knowing she could trust him and so . . . after all she'd said . . . rested her head upon his shoulder the smell of seaweed came from her hair as he caressed her soft skin which was now somewhat scaly to the touch still . . . the man sighed said . . . I'll love you a day and forever (c)November 11, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
"...and gives the sea a chance to maneuver his thoughts" Great line, Jerry. I very much liked how your poem ended. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
For the most part I like upbeat endings also, Bluesy. Thanks much for checking out my poem today. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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