When Time Becomes A Lamentation: Her Horological Hysterectomy...

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Open Poetry #50

When Time Becomes A Lamentation: Her Horological Hysterectomy...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-07 07:22 PM

You sigh low, all alone sitting on our bed
with your head on your knees spreading your toes...intrigued,
as if you just found them there
at the ends of your feet

I sigh lower, on my temporary bed
in this faraway place
watching through the wired window,
wishing time was faster and I had less of it

I'll be sitting on my bed with my head on my knees,
looking inside...intrigued,
as if I just found you there at the end of my heartstrings,
but still as far out of reach as the moon

Tempus Fugit...when you’re running out of it...

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2018-04-07 08:21 PM

Sad lamentations within each line. Like always, Blusey, you give your readers much to chew on

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-07-2018 08:55 PM).]

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2018-04-07 10:02 PM

Thank you so much, Jerry. I appreciate your comments.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2018-04-08 04:59 AM

Bluesy,
Whether you are lamenting or celebrating, your love for Linny is the constant, that never wavers or weakens. You heart is in every piece shining like a beacon. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2018-04-08 05:21 AM

Thanks for reading, Miss Lori and commenting so sweetly.

...just bein' Bluesy

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