The Space Between Our Hearts

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Open Poetry #50

The Space Between Our Hearts

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
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0 posted 2017-02-24 12:03 PM

   The Space Between
          our Hearts

A long-shadow sunset
paints the West horizon
in crimson and amethyst.
A blue moon rising
dances the Eastern
mountain tops as
one by one the stars
     come on.
A thick evening frost
settles like condensed
   moonlight
over this remnant of
vanishing wilderness.
A last North wind
blows from ten
thousand miles;
yet my mind and spirit
turn South to the
approaching Spring
with only thoughts
and dreams of you
though the endless,
oblivious business of
this tired world still
fills all lonely space
between our hearts.

           --- b. e. adams

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2017-02-24 12:19 PM

quote:
A last North wind
blows from ten
thousand miles;
yet my mind and spirit
turn South to the
approaching Spring
with only thoughts
and dreams of you

Like a poem within a poem Bruce.

Enjoyed your poetry very much. From the cold, crisp air of Winter to the sanguine hopes which lay dormant now, but soon to be awakened by the breath of Spring.

BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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2 posted 2017-02-24 08:20 AM

thank you, "Bluesy!"

jjote
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since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2017-02-27 12:38 PM

I like the image of a blue moon dancing on mountain tops as stars come on.

So dreamy this one, 'Poet.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
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4 posted 2017-02-27 01:35 PM

Thank you !

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