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Open Poetry #50

sentimental poem

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2018-04-01 08:19 PM

Your eyes
Are as the mount Fuji-Yama,
Under a blue sky,
And the road which leads to it
Is lined with cherry trees
In the pink petals,
Your eyes are flavors
Which inhale my reason.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2018-04-01 08:56 PM

THIS is exquisite within the wording and wonderful essence you brought out with your words.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2018-04-02 12:37 PM

Aires of Japan.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2018-04-02 04:57 AM

Way cool Yann! ~L

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2018-04-02 11:06 AM

agree with Jerry, my friend. Wonderful piece.

j.

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

5 posted 2018-04-02 01:04 PM

Enjoyed You are the reason I enjoy reading ...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2018-04-02 02:13 PM

Thanks Jerry, Bluesy, Lori, Jwesley, Paul
for the kind ad cool comments,

wishes to read you

yann

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