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Open Poetry #50
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
0 posted 2018-03-25 12:12 PM

Continents spurt and seep
as white moonlight dapples
soft hooded mountains

Luminous trees grow rapidly,
their fragile newborns' left shivering
across the surreal cold of darkness

An oil spill shaped in deep blue,
pools deep and menacingly formless  
reaching for an appearance of dew-laden stars


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-03-25 05:48 AM

oooh I'm liking this stuff Bluesy! Really creative in your descriptions, very powerful images. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-03-25 06:17 PM

Thank you, Miss Lori! I trust you enjoyed your trip...

...just bein' Bluesy
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