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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-03-06 01:20 AM


Love passed by my window
all of five-foot-four
Relish on the table
anyone know the score?

A hellish night in 'Frisco
led me to believe
a tenderloin is tasted
just above the knee

She left without a whisper
in the ear left by the door
I could have loved her better
if I would have loved her more

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
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1 posted 2018-03-06 04:23 AM


I can read between the lines here.
'relish on the table'
'anyone know the score'
You were watching sports on TV and 5ft 4
got bored and went home.
One can only take so much tenderloin.
~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-03-06 11:52 AM


Ha-ha-ha! Very little gets past you, Lori Rhoden!

Thankies...!

...just bein' Bluesy

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